Evaluation

The link below will take you to a Prezi presentation on my evaluation;



    http://prezi.com/uzmkqea_b6ly/evaluation/

Preliminary Task- Film

   

Link- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wzk2F_H8O0s&feature=em-share_video_user

Audience Feedback

The above picture shows what our audience feedback forms look like;

• Whilst our class watched our film, we handed out these forms for them to fill out concerning the content of our film
• I will now be debriefing on the responses in order to discover what we could improve on for our main task

Results

Question 1: Could you see all of the required techniques? (Shot reverse shot, Match on Action 180 degree rule)

• To this, the majority of people said that they could see all of the techniques very clearly. However, some people mentioned that we had slightly broken the 180 Degree Rule by filming in two different rooms.

Question 2:  Did the extract show continuity?

• Everybody said that the extract did show continuity, which is good as this suggests that it won't be a massive issue when it comes to filming our main task

Question 3: Do you recommend any improvements?

•  Most people recommended that we use more non-diegetic sound in our extract to add effect and atmosphere. However, we purposely decided not to include this as we couldn't find a piece of music that would convey the messages we wanted ton portray
• A few people recommended that we improve our camera-work, as in places it was a bit shaky. We agreed with this criticism will be more careful in our main task

Question 4: What did you like most about our extract?

• Everybody we asked said that they liked our image composition and accurate continuity the best.

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Shot blog

This blog features all the shots that will be used in our preliminary task, their definitions and picture examples;

Wide shot- this features one or more characters and the surrounding area

Close up- when a characters face takes up most of the shot

Two shot- when two characters are present in a shot

P.O.V Shot- when the shot is from the perspective of a character

Shooting Script

           Shot                    Mise-en-Scene           Extra Info

    Wide shot of Lucy on the sofa            Location: Living room                   Diegetic sound of TV                       

                                                                      Costume: Casual Clothes                throughout

                                                                      Props: Sofa, iPad                               

   Tracking shot of Martha down          Costume: T-shit, leggings

    the house, heading towards the        Location: Dining Room

    living room door 

   POV from Lucy on the sofa,               Location: Living room

    looking at Martha by the door

   Match on Action of Martha                Location: Living Room                Diegetic sound of door  

    opening the door which then                                                                            opening

    cuts to her walking through it

   Wide shot of living room (180           Location: Living Room

    degree rule)

    Two shot of girls on the sofa              Location: Living Room

    (180 degree rule)                                  Props: TV Remote, Sofa

   Shot reverse shot of                             Location: Living Room                Dialogue: 

    conversation on the sofa (180                                                                        Lucy: Oi

    degree rule)                                                                                                          Martha: Wah?

                                                                                                   Lucy: I was watching that!

                                                                                                   Martha: Well, you're not now

   Close-up shot of Lucy's                       Location: Living room

    annoyed face

Initial Ideas Mind-map